Refine the Roots: Poetry Revision Session
Refine the Roots: Poetry Revision Session
Your poem is almost there… but something isn’t clicking.
Maybe the rhythm feels off, the ending doesn’t land, or you know it could be stronger but can’t quite put your finger on how. That’s where Refine the Roots comes in.
Think of this as a revision space, not a red-pen critique. I’ll help you dig into your poem, explore possibilities, and refine it in real-time—without the frustration of figuring it out alone. Whether you’re revising for yourself, for submission, or just because you know there’s a stronger version waiting to be unearthed, we’ll get there together.
What You’ll Get
🌻 A Deep-Dive Session – We'll talk through your poem(s), find what’s working, and untangle what’s not.
🌻 Guided Revision Time – You’ll make changes during the session so we’re not just talking—you’re actively refining.
🌻 Written Feedback – After our session, I’ll send detailed notes and suggestions so you can keep fine-tuning.
🌻 Two Weeks of Follow-Up – Got questions? Need a second opinion on a tweak? You’ll have access to a private Slack space for quick check-ins.
How It Works
🌻 Book Your Session – Grab a spot that works for you.
🌻 Send Your Poem(s) – Submit 1-3 poems at least 24 hours in advance so I can sit with them ahead of time.
🌻 Live Revision Time – We’ll meet on Zoom, talk through your work, and refine your lines together.
🌻 Post-Session Notes – I’ll send written feedback with next-step suggestions.
🌻 Stay Connected – Get two weeks of revision support in Slack, so you’re not left on your own.
‼️ Before you purchase, check my scheduling calendar to make sure a time that works for you is available.
Choose Your Session
🌿 1 Poem → $50 (1-hour live session + 2 weeks of follow-up)
🌿 2-3 Poems → $75 (90-minute live session + 2 weeks of follow-up)
📌 Limited Spots Available – I’m only offering 2 slots this month to keep the sessions focused and in-depth.
Is This Right for You?
🌱 You want honest but encouraging feedback on a poem you’re revising.
🌱 You’re preparing work for submission, performance, or a collection and need fresh eyes.
🌱 You like the idea of collaborating on revision, not just getting a bunch of comments and being sent off alone.
🌱 You want real-time revision support + follow-up guidance instead of a one-time critique.
Let’s Revise Together.
Poems don’t just grow on their own—sometimes they need a little care, a little digging, and the right eyes on them.
If you’re ready to revise with intention and support, I’d love to work with you.
Have a question? See if it’s in the FAQ!